Homecoming — A Closer Reading
Edition facts
The story opens with a lone rider crossing a desert on a large horse, the landscape described in stark, elemental terms: shifting sand, a river, a setting sun. The man's eyes are "alive and aflame," a detail that contrasts with his "dust-caked, tired body." This initial scene establishes a pattern of movement between physical travel and interior memory, as the narrative soon shifts to a flashback of the night before he shipped out for World War III.
The prose is economical, favoring concrete images over explanation. The horse is named Conqueror, and the man carries a locket containing pictures of his wife and sons. These objects—the horse, the locket, a ring with an inscription—recur as touchstones, anchoring the protagonist's emotional journey in tangible things.
Movement Between Present and Past
The story alternates between the protagonist's present journey through a ruined landscape and his memories of the past. The transitions are marked by sensory triggers: the sight of a fire, the taste of coffee, the feel of water. In one memory, he gives his wife a diamond ring; in another, he says goodbye to his sons. The present-tense scenes are spare, focused on survival—finding water, building a fire, sleeping. The past scenes are more detailed, filled with dialogue and domestic warmth. This structure creates a tension between the desolation of the present and the fullness of what has been lost.
The flashbacks are not presented in chronological order. The first memory is of the night before he left; later, a memory of a happier time with his family emerges. The reader pieces together the story through these fragments, never getting a complete picture of the war or its aftermath.
Recurring Images: Fire, Water, and the Locket
Three images recur throughout the story: fire, water, and the locket. Fire appears in the present as a campfire whose coals are described as "living fingers clutching at the wood in consuming embrace." In the past, a fire burns in the family's living room. Water is a source of renewal—the man and his horse plunge into a river, drinking deeply—but also of reflection, as the river mirrors the setting sun. The locket, containing pictures of his wife and sons, is a physical link to the past. He wears it around his neck, and it survives the journey. In the final scene, he removes it and hangs it on the doorknob of his house, where it swings "like a pendulum."
These images accumulate meaning through repetition. Fire consumes; water cleanses; the locket holds memory. The story does not explain their symbolism, but their recurrence gives the narrative a poetic coherence.
The Unicorn Horse and the Ruined World
The horse, Conqueror, is described as having "a horn in the center of its forehead, like a unicorn." This detail is introduced late in the story, after the protagonist has reached his former home. The horse is a companion throughout the journey, but its mythical attribute is only mentioned at the end, suggesting that the world has changed in ways that blend the real and the fantastic. The landscape is littered with ruined cities, but the story offers no explanation for the catastrophe. The focus remains on the protagonist's personal quest.
The horse's name, Conqueror, echoes the protagonist's military past, but the animal is gentle, not warlike. The final image of the horse trotting away, "the sound of his hooves echoing hollowly in the vast emptiness," reinforces the sense of a world emptied of meaning.
The Inscription and the Unspoken
The ring the protagonist gives his wife has an inscription inside it, but the story never reveals what it says. The reader only learns that when he returns to the house, he "knew then" because of the inscription. This withheld information creates a mystery that is never resolved. Similarly, the protagonist's wife and sons are never named; they are referred to only as "his wife" and "their sons." The lack of names keeps them archetypal, representing family rather than specific individuals.
The story also leaves the war itself undescribed. The protagonist is a veteran, but the narrative does not depict combat or its aftermath. The focus is entirely on the emotional journey: the hope of returning home, the fear of what he will find, and the final realization that "nothing is forever." The ending is ambiguous—he runs from the house, leaving the locket behind, and rides away into the emptiness.
The story rewards attention to its small details: the ring's inscription, the horse's horn, the locket's pendulum swing. These elements are not explained but are left for the reader to interpret. The narrative's structure—moving between past and present, between memory and immediate experience—creates a sense of longing that is never fully resolved. Readers may find themselves returning to the opening description of the rider's "hollow eyes" after finishing the story, seeing it in a new light.