Our Town — A Closer Reading

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Bixby, Jerome, 1923-1998 Project Gutenberg 2019
Science fiction; Short stories; War stories; Villages -- Fiction; Older men -- Fiction; Tennessee -- Fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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Words: 11,202
Reading time: 49 min
Text sections: 2
In a post-attack Tennessee valley, elderly survivors of Smoky Creek maintain routines of fishing, charcoal-making, and Sunday Socials while hiding from enemy jets. Jerome Bixby's 1955 story juxtaposes domestic details—curtain poles, rationed coffee—with the threat of aerial surveillance, showing how the old folks' quiet defiance unsettles the invaders.
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Jerome Bixby's 'Our Town' (1955) opens with a precise military strike: a jet bomber and four fighters appear over Bald Ridge, circle Smoky Creek, Tennessee, and drop midget A-bombs that kill everyone except twenty-one old men and women away at their annual Grandfolk's Picnic. The catalog subjects list 'War stories' and 'Villages—Fiction,' but the excerpts reveal a story less about combat than about aftermath—the careful routines of survivors who ration coffee, sew buttonholes on blackout curtains, and hold Sunday Socials by lamplight. Bixby devotes more space to Ben fixing a curtain pole or Susan knitting than to explosions, and the enemy jets that later crash are downed not by soldiers but by rifle shots from the woods.

Domestic Detail as Resistance

The excerpts show the old people's daily life as a series of small, deliberate acts. Ben notices the woodbox is empty; he will bring home charcoal from Windy's barn, now the 'general store.' Susan has lunch ready—chicken, green beans, boiled potatoes from hidden gardens. The blackout curtains are hung with buttonholes sewn along the edge, fitted over nails driven around the window casing. Oil is precious; lamps are lit only on Social night. These details are not mere color—they are the texture of survival under occupation. The enemy jets that sniff for radioactive particles or hidden labs are thwarted by the very ordinariness of the town: a ruined town might hide a lab, but these old people are simply living, and their mundane competence—fixing a phonograph, fishing for catfish—becomes a form of defiance.

The Social as a Staged Normalcy

The Sunday Social is the story's emotional center. Ben forgets it's Sunday until Susan reminds him: 'You know tonight's the Social; me and Anna are fixing a big dinner—steaks and all the trimmings.' Owen Urey will read Shakespeare. The old people stay up till midnight for eats and entertainment; otherwise they go to bed at eight. The Social is a deliberate performance of pre-attack life, requiring careful preparation: the curtain pole must be fixed, the blankets draped, the lamps lit only when guests arrive. Bixby underlines the fragility of this normalcy by noting that oil is precious and that the phonograph turntable makes 'an awful lot of noise.' The Social is not just a gathering—it is a ritual assertion that the community still exists, even if only twenty-one people remain.

The Enemy's Perspective and the Limits of the Excerpts

The catalog subjects include 'Science fiction' and 'War stories,' but the excerpts offer little about the enemy's identity or motives. The jets have 'broad slavic faces,' and the bombardier may have tripped a bomb 'just for the hell of it.' Later, a jet crashes after being hit by rifle bullets; another crashes two years later. The story's title echoes Thornton Wilder's play, but Bixby's town is not a universal Everytown—it is a specific place in Tennessee, with Bald Ridge, Lawson's Hill, and a concrete railway bridge. The excerpts break off before revealing how the old people's strategy unfolds or whether the jets ever stop coming. Readers must infer the full arc from these fragments, which focus on domestic routines rather than military tactics. The story's science-fictional element—the 'sniffing' jets and midget A-bombs—is grounded in the concrete details of rural life.

Readers coming to 'Our Town' expecting a conventional war story or a simple revenge tale will find something quieter and more unsettling. Bixby's attention to the physical objects of daily life—the iron curtain rod, the oil lamp, the charcoal fire that doesn't give off much smoke—creates a world where survival depends on knowing how to fix a socket and when to light a lamp. The enemy jets are almost incidental; the real drama is in the old people's refusal to let their town disappear. Pay attention to what the excerpts leave unsaid: the gaps between the crashes, the unspoken grief of the 'Grandfolk's Picnic,' and the question of how long such a life can last.

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